Comments on: #16 - Disrupt

By: Vestdan

Vestdan — Thu, 26 Jul 2007 01:14:25 +0000

Thanks! Heh. Been a little debate in the discussion thread though, mostly one guy who thinks I stole his idea. *shrug*.

Speaking of my articles, and the Magic storyline… did you ever perchance read my Weatherlight Saga?

By: Tiago

Tiago — Wed, 25 Jul 2007 10:35:24 +0000

Oh, it’s so good to have critics

Welcome to the time spiral books, without wanting to spoil too much, it gets a little bit like that sometimes, planeswalkers appearing out of nowhere and taking the party to who knows where. The next comic will try to explain a little of this sudden disappearance.

OK, Ike’s phrase isn’t very happy, need to look out for these inconsistencies in the text. It should have been more like: “We’ll find a village in the meanwhile.” or “I’m sure we’ll find a village before it gets dark”.

Two comics a day is a little too much for me, but today I’ll be advancing next week’s comic. It’s the good part of the comic being story driven, I can produce comics as the script is written. With the other ones I was always waiting for the last day possible, seeing if there was anything on the news or in some forum that I could use.

P.S.: Your article on MtgSal was great VestDan.

By: Demonic_toast

Demonic_toast — Wed, 25 Jul 2007 08:59:08 +0000

Yeah, i thought i missed one and that you did like 2 on a day (ah sweet dreams ). I did always wonder why you have to smack a guy over the nugget to make him “forget something” you would think it deals damage to ^_^.

By: Vestdan

Vestdan — Wed, 25 Jul 2007 06:51:20 +0000

So, someone summoned Jhoira and Teferi? Aww…

Seriously though, while the loss of babe-factor is unfortunate, I’m a little more concerend about that happening offscreen. It’s a jarring transition–last we saw, there was Jhoria giving the boys a quest, and now they’re alone and a cave appears? It feels like there’s a comic missing in between, is all. Also, “It’s hardly night, we’ll find a village soon” confuzzles me.

Anyway, just a little friendly critique there. Keep up the good work!